This moment was originally written as the bird running into the window and getting Evey's attention. But Harry had the idea of the bird remaining alive and talking directly to Evey. I think this works better because it's more uncanny.
On another note, I still feel like I don't know much about our audience. I'm reaching out again. Leave a comment or if you're feeling up to drop us an email at firstname.lastname@example.org. Just like before, feel free to ask questions, give your thoughts & concerns, or even talk about things you'd want/like to see. Once again, I can't promise anything but I'll do my best to listen.